critical evaluation

EVERYONE PLEASE GIVE US COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WE NEED THEM FOR OUR EVALUATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jenna

Jenna
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our final copy!!!

JENNA BY ROSIE AN HAN

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we recon its finished but dont hold us to it!

Jenna nearly finishedx

Jenna nearly finishedx
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computer

our computers are rubbish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

editing

me and hannah were in the emdia room today doin loads more editing.. we managed to move our film onto another computer as the first one kept freezing on us. we were also changing our screen play adding some more shots and changing the dialogue etc...
we would like to point out THIS WAS OUR DAY OFF!!!!!!!! IT WAS A TRAINING DAY AND WE WERE THE ONLY PEOPLE IN SCHOOL!!!
we are doing some more filming on sunday.